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By Adorama Learning Center Editors

September 7, 2010

"This shot serves to prove that gear isn't everything, what matters more is the story that's told in the frame."—Ingrid Spangler


Photo © Alison Gault, Mountain Brook, AL. Nikon D300s, Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8 VR II lens, SB60 Flash, shot at 70mm. Exposure: 1/125 second, f/2.8, ISO 1000 in aperture priority mode. Light editing in Adobe Lightroom 2 adding clarity, brightness and contrast, adjusted white balance.

Photographer’s statement: “This shot was taken after a posed group shot in front of the scoreboard showing the final score of a big tournament win. The boys wanted to climb the fence and get a posed group shot on top, and I took this as they were climbing up. To me, it is a reflections of their teamwork, athleticism, and excitement after a tournament championship win. They never all made it to the top—the parents called them down, realizing that it might not be such a safe idea, but I don't think I would have liked the posed shot nearly as much as this one!  I love the colors in this image:  the red in the sign, the blue fence cover, and the green and yellow uniforms.  I know it's not technically perfect  and I don't have a fast wide-angle lens, so I was getting the group shots at a not-so-wide 70mm -- the boys were bunched up more for the group shot, and then they spread out to climb up, so I cut off the knee of the boy on the left.  However, it was a true grab shot, they started coming back down almost as quickly as they scampered up, so I really didn't have time to think about it too much”

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Ingrid Spangler: I love this shot. I love the feeling of movement and the great lines created by the boys’ bodies scrambling up the fence. The colors are bright and crisp, and I don’t even mind the boy on the left’s knee being cut off. If I have to nit pick, I’d say I would prefer for the scoreboard in the back to be more in the center of the frame, but this would probably have involved the photographer repositioning herself, and probably losing the spontaneity of the moment. This shot serves to prove that gear isn't everything, what matters more is the story that's told in the frame. All in all a lovely shot. 

Jack Howard: The moment here outweighs all else. This is probably much more a true representation of this team than either of the posed shots. There's an adage among many community newspaper editors that faces are what sells papers, but I have always thought this philosophy underestimates the viewership of community newspapers and results in boring, staged photographs getting more play in the community sections. In other words, this is a great shot of kids being kids, being caught mid-moment, and the energy certainly comes through here to the point where the fun of the moment outweighs many of the small techy issues Ingrid points out.

Mason Resnick:
I agree with Jack and Ingrid here: The moment outweighs any minor compositional or technical flaws. It’s a wonderfully humorous capture of pure youthful enthusiasm and playfulness. This is the kind of shot that, if I were a parent of one of the kids in the picture, would be proud to display…along with the trophy for winning the big game. The take-away here? If you always strive for “perfection,” you may miss a great shot like this one!

 

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Thanks for the

Thanks to the photozap experts for the critique. I have been following photozap since it started, and was thrilled both to have my image selected, and with your kind reviews. And thank you, kebwebs, for your advice. Trust me, that D700 is on my wish list, right behind the fast wide-angle lens! My flash had fully charged recyclable batteries, so there wasn't a long lag between flashes, and I did actually get them a second or two later. And it may seem like it would have made a better shot, but it wasn't. It lacked the charm that this one had. But I agree that a higher ISO on a D700 may have allowed me to get several more shots to choose from, rather than just the 2 - 3 that I was able to get. Anyway, I appreciate your advice and feedback. Thanks to you all!

by Alison in AL on September 9, 2010

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A very good shot

This is a fun shot requiring minimal explanation. The best shots usually don't need to be described, they describe themselves. That being said I would have loved the moment about 3 seconds later when the first few heads started to turn and face camera. Using a flash can make those moments impossible to capture where continuous shooting mode at say iso 3200 makes it possible. I'm not sure how much noise the D300 generates at iso 3200 but I shoot a D700 where the aforementioned noise is not a problem. This is a good shot but a different approach would have afforded an even better chance at capturing the exact moment.

by kebwebs in Plymouth, MA on September 7, 2010

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